Hey everyone! As most of you that’ve been reading my posts know, The Fold Awakens will be finishing up when OY30 makes his grand return and hopefully can smash out his last chapter or two of the episode. I was re-reading the episode and I realized that we actually have a lot of grammar mistakes! So I gathered my wits and edited the story! It’s now better overall on the grammar side.
Now, I haven’t made it entirely proper, because it’s clearly written by kids in school, and you have to have personality with first-person writing. But it’s a bit cleaner now, and should definitely be a smoother read.
Coming soon: Origami! 😮